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Manuscript Peer Review

I am so grateful for your support in reviewing this meditation booklet! Below I offer some ideas for feedback. You are welcome to respond to as little or as much as you want.
Deadline for Feedback: August 24th by 6:00pm
For those I have previously sent drafts to, please use this version if you have not started.
As you are reading, please feel free to note:
- Anything language that is unclear
- Areas that could use more explanation
- Places that are too wordy.
- Any grammatical issues that stand out.
Other feedback I would appreciate:
Are the meditation scripts clear and easy to follow?
Are the set ups and endings fluid?
Which is your favorite?
Is there one or two that need more work?
Does the format and structure make sense?
Meditation Transcripts



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